Feedback after first showcase =D

There were a lot of positive comments on our camera movement from this group. They also commented on the fact that the storyline is confusing, after getting this feedback it's fine as our group hasn't put our sequence into its actual proper order yet. They also commented on the black screens in between our sequence, but obviously my group and I are going to edit it so our storyline makes sense, and so there are no gaps in between our sequence.











There were some comments on the lengths of the shots, and some people commented how they thought they were too long. My group decided that we might as well cut the walking shot out completely, as it's not very important to our sequence and it would just drag on and make the audience lose interest.















Most people from this group commented on our lighting. Of course my group are aware that we need to do something about this. So I guess using final cut and the colour balance tool, we could use this to adjust our lighting, but we are going to make sure that the realistic feel is still there. We don't want to take away the realistic looking lighting, but obviously as for the nigh time scenes, it is quite challenging to get the lighting to be proper clear.







Someone in this group commented how we had no sound and that we should put some in, this is fine for our group, and this feedback is ok and understandable, as my group have not yet produced our sound for our opening sequence. We have many comments saying "good shots" .."good use of camera angles" and we are pleased with this at least, as we worked hard on our shots and getting them to look interesting.












From all of the classrooms feedback, we have decided as a group that cutting out the long walking forest scene would probably make a huge difference to the length of our sequence, and the overall understanding. It's pretty clear the walking in this sequence would just lose interest in the audience pretty quickly. We were happy with the rest of the feedback though,and I am very glad that there are no major changes needed. ^^
Our group are going to work our absolute best to cover all these areas, and to hopefully get a more positive feedback next time!